Draw it Again?

I can tell you've gotten a lot better with making your drawings more life like. I think the girl on the rights head is a little too far off of her neck. Her hand is a little scary looking too. I like the shading on her pants a lot though. They genuinely looks like real jeans. I told you how I felt over on oekaki about her leg which I'VE STILL NOT RED LINED hrrrrggg. Besides that it's pretty awesome. I wouldn't mind having a haircut like that, it's actually really cute. I think it'd be cool if you actually went back and made intricate lacy patterns on her corset.